Ext. Scene - Car three characters
Three 17 year old [males], TOny is sitting at the driver seat of the car, el cesar is sitting in the hood and riely is lying on one side. Stereotypical characters, italoamerican, cuban and the “black guy”.
Toni
Dialog. So Now we wait
El Cesar
(Cubanly)
Ok, wey, but I have to to take a leak
Riely
C’mon when is this shorty coming
Fade to black
RICH HOUSE, Jamie is a baby looking boy, about 17 year old, problems with family, thinks he hates his family because his father is never around and his mother is dictatorial. Leaving his house
INTERIOR
Jamie {Shouting}
I’m Leaving Mom!
Jamie’s mom {Shouting from upper floor}
Where are you going James?
JAMIE
I’m meeting some friends, be back for dinner.
Jamie’s mom
Which friends?
JAMIE
You don’t know them, Bye!
{Indistinct shouting From Mother}
Ext. Scene - Car three characters
Jamie arrives to the meeting point, he is reserved and tries to fit in with the gang.
jameie
Sorry I’m Late
{El Cesar returns}
Tony
You don’t leave us waiting
EL CESAR
Yes, don’t screw it up amigo ok? .
Riely
Heard on the hood that you have some interesting in the stove for us bro.
EL Cesar
Lets get going cabrones, we have some business to do.
Riely
Yes, Lets get craking, I could use a beer
TONY {Turns the car on and as he shift into gear, fail and stall. Second tray gents the car moving} MMMMM
FADE TO BLACK
CAFE, DARK PLACE SMOKE EVERYWHERE, IDEALLY ROUND TABLE, PEOPLE TALKING AND DRINKING COFFEE.
TONY
Ok mates, we need to get this thing moving, Jamie, what is this business you have to offer?
Jamie
Ok, so as you might know, my father is Jason Delgado, the banker.
Riley
So, you are loaded white boy.
Jamie
Well yes not me, but my father is.
TONY
So what is in there for us? You don’t need no money.
jamie
The thing is that he is a cheap bastard and he’s never around, and never passes me a dime
EL CESAR
Whay about your mom?
JAMIE
She’s just stupid, no worry
RIELY
No worry about what white boy? You haven’t told us anything yet.
JAMIE
Thats true, and I apologise, the thing is that I’m running short on cash and I need some. So, last week the safety’s key got stuck, so all of the jewels are just there in a drawer waiting for someone to take that. O, here is the waitress.
EL CESAR
Cheka esta senorita brothers.
WAITRESS
Hi guys, what are you going to have?
TONY
I’ll have a Scotch in the rocks please.
Riely
I’ll have a beer
EL CESAR
Make that 2
JAMIE
I’ll have a lime water please.
WAITRESS
I’ll have to see some ID please.
TONY
MMM, I’ll just have a coke
RIELY
Ill have a Cold Cappuccino lady
EL CESAR
I’ll have a Virgin Cuba Libre senorita.
WAITRES
OK, so it’s 2 cokes, one frappuccino and one water.
TONY
Yes, whatever.
JAMIE
What a PEEEP, no guys?
EL CESAR
Watch that language, there’s ladies in the room.
JAMIE (LAUGHING)
Screw’em
EL CESAR
Screw you hombre!
RIELY
Hey homies! Relax
EL CESAR
And screw you blanquito.
RIELY
What was that again?
TONY
Would you dorks just shut up! There’s business to do.
{Huming form everyone}
EL CESAR (Breaking the Ice)
So what do you need us for, you can just take it and sell it yourself.
JAMIE
No way, I'll be the first suspect. So i need you to brake in the house and make it look like just another brake in.
TONY
How much do you think the whole thing would be made into cash?
RIELY
(Interrupting)Yes, lets talk about numbers bro.
TONY
Riely, let him talk.
JAMIE
About 50 grand, or more.
{Faces}
TONY
So, what’s your price
JAMIE
What do you mean?
TONY
Your fee genius, how much do you want, you do think we do stuff for free right?
JAMIE
I was thinking you could keep, i don’t know, 5 10 percent maybe.
{RIELY + EL CESAR START TO TALK IRRITATED}
TONY
SHHHH let me talk. We've known each other many years, but this is the first time you ever came to me for counsel or for help. I can't remember the last time that you invited me to your house for a cup of coffee, you never wanted my friendship.
JAMIE
It’s just....
EL CESAR
Let the man Talk.
TONY
I understand, you have a good living and you didn't needed friends like us,But, uh, now you come to me, and you say: "Don TONY, give me justice." But you don't ask with respect. You don't offer friendship. You don't even think to call me Godfather. Instead, you come into my house on the day my daughter is to be married, and you ask me to do murder for money.
JAMIE
What daughter? Murder Who? What are you talking about?
RIELY
Isn’t that like the opening form The Godfather two?
EL CESAR
No, i think its from the third one
TONY
It’s form the first one actually, but that’s nothing to do with this, Im trying to make a point here.
RIELY
Which one is it? I got no shit from all of that jaba waba.
TONY
Its 70 percent for us, you can keep the rest
JAMIE
Make it 60
EL CESAR
65
JAMIE
Deal
EL CESAR
You could have just said that from the beginning, couldn’t you Tony?
TONY
You guys are so un-professional
FADE OUT TO CAr
Ext. Scene - Car four characters
TONY
So, when?
JAMIE
Tomorrow night my daddy is leaving with my mom at 11 pm.
EL CESAR
Hombre, then you’ll open the door at eleven o five
JAMIE
That should be all-right.
Ext. Scene - HOUSE NIGHT
{CAR LEAVES}
EL CESAR
That’s us guys.
{CAR WITH LIGHTS OFF GETS NEAR THE HOUSE}
EXT. SCENE - DOOR
TONY
Be quiet
{EL CESAR TRIES TO OPEN THE DOOR, BUT ITS LOCKED}
EL CESAR
It’s locked guys, the shortie told us off!
RIELY
Don’t go all hysterical girls, i guess its just to make it look more real, for the inssurance or stuff like that.
SONY
Wait here, I've got a crowbar in the car.
{OPENS THE DOOR}
INTERIOR - HOUSE DARK NIGHT
EL CESAR
I’ve got a bad feeling hermanos.
RIELY
Keep it cool, its gonna be allright
TONY
JACKPOT!!!!!!!
EL CESAR
Chingado, mira esto hombre.
RIELY (acting all black)
O yea bro, thats what I call bling
TONY
Ok, lets get going
RIELY
Wait, there’s some computers and stuff here
EL CESAR
O, yea
TONY
I’ll open the trunk, be right back
[AS EL CESAR AND RIELY ARE TAKING A COMPUTER, LIGHTS COME ON, THE POLICE IS THERE]
[EVERYONE STARTS RUNNING]
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